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[docs-scanner] Unclear pronoun reference in cloud delivery note #26547
The note about cloud delivery contains an unclear pronoun reference:
Audit logs cover local sandboxes, the sandboxes that run on developers'
machines. Cloud delivery stores their audit records in the cloud. It
doesn't add cloud sandbox coverage.
The pronoun "It" in "It doesn't add cloud sandbox coverage" is ambiguous. Does "It" refer to "Cloud delivery" or to the entire audit logs feature?
Why this matters
A reader trying to understand what audit logs cover for cloud sandboxes will be confused about whether cloud delivery adds coverage for cloud sandboxes or whether audit logs as a whole don't cover cloud sandboxes.
Suggested fix
Clarify by using the explicit noun instead of the pronoun:
Audit logs cover local sandboxes, the sandboxes that run on developers'
machines. Cloud delivery stores their audit records in the cloud but
doesn't add cloud sandbox coverage.
Or restructure to make the relationship clearer:
Audit logs cover local sandboxes, the sandboxes that run on developers'
machines. Cloud delivery stores these local audit records in the cloud;
it doesn't extend coverage to cloud sandboxes.
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